In addition to fitting into a Peircean system, many of the features of Peters’ discussion resonate with ideas in An Archaeology of the Fall, especially the notion that the serpent was a reification of Eve’s own unconscious thoughts and the notion that we project referentiality into words that are only systems of differences. Both these themes deserve more consideration. They form a novel scaffold onto which we may hang Peters’ insightful nested steps.
At the same time, one of the plot elements, the jinn that Keller made a deal with, did not come to mind. This deserves further thought.